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i have sên a film on Internet anh it make me impress especially. It's Your Name. The film revoles around Mitsuha and Taki' actions, which begin to have a dramatic impact on each other;s live, weaving the into a fabic held together by fate and circumstance

Answer 1

i have seen a film on the Internet anh it made me impress especially. It's called 'It's Your Name' which is a japanese film.It revoles around Mitsuha and Taki' actions (mình thấy từ actions không phù hợp lắm, bạn nên thay bằng stories, journeys,...thì sẽ hay hơn), which begin to have a dramatic impact on each other's live, weaving the into a fabic held together by fate and circumstance. (bạn nên viết nhiều hơn về bộ phim, vd lí do tại sao bạn thích phim này, cốt truyện,...)

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