Bài IELTS task 1 - LINE CHART [closed]

Question

The graph below gives information on households with a regular use of car in great Britain from 1971 to 2007

 

The line chart illustrates the proportion of regular use of car in each household in Great Britain over the period of 37 years, from 1971 to 2007

                 Generally speaking, it could be observed from the provided graph that the number of car owners increased continuously during the period. While the number of Britain households without car underwent a significant decline, the households own one, two, three or more car followed an upward trend.

                   In particular, the year 1971 witnessed almost half of British households didn’t have regular use of car. Around 49% people who didn’t use car and almost 44% of households had one car, but only about 7% had two cars. It was a small number of families which owned three or more cars they just took up around 1% of households in this category

                   The one-car household was the most common type during 37 years. The percentage of one –car owners remained stable till the end of period. It is noticeable that the was a significant change in the proportion of households which had no car. It fell steadily around 25%, from 49% to 24% in 2007. In contract, the proportion of two-car household increased dramatically, reached about 26% at the end of period, whereas the number of families had three or more cars rose to 6%.

Answer 1

theo mình overall thì không nên viết generally speaking và b nên thay bằng Looking at the chart in more detail nhé ^^ thấy generally speaking mình hay dùng trong văn nói hơn.

-didn't = did not nhé wri k đc viết tắt

đoạn cuối fell phải chia quá khứ bạn nhé và by contrast hoặc in contrast chứ k phải contract nha ^^

theo mình bạn cũng nên cho thêm mấy cấu trúc như reach the peak hay reach the highest/ lowest point để bài linh hoạt cấu trúc vào có điểm nhấn nhé

chúc bạn học tốt ^^