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Question: Some people think that travel helps gaining knowledge, but others think that TV and internet play an important role in gaining knowledge. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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That obtaining knowledge from travel or TV and the internet is discussed by various societies. While the travel brings an effortless memory thanks to real experiences, easy approach and low cost are advantages that TV and the internet generate. As far as I am concern that it is more beneficial to enrich knowledge from TV and the internet.        

On the one hand, due to a chance of real experiences, knowledge that people perceive from travel is remembered readily. To commence with, travelers hear with their own ears and see with their own eyes, thus having confidence in things that arising from real exposure. When there is no doubt about a information, people are likely to absorb immediately this information. More remarkably, not only does information from travel create the trust but also the attraction and deep understanding. Being accessed to real images and activities that struck travelers are acts of human such as culture, cuisine and landscape. Accordingly, both the trust and attraction of things from travel bring good memory about these.

On the other hand, TV and the internet help to have knowledge that is effortless approach and gains with lower cost. First and foremost, knowledge as well as information enriched by TV and the internet finds it easy to access because of social network and tools, namely, computers, cell-phone and high quality of internet service. Additionally, watching a program TV or network access to know an issue is lower cost than travel. Instead of having to cover accommodation and traveling expense, people may just stay at home, while still seeing diverse knowledge. Hence, obtaining great learning from TV and the internet is reasonable due to its approachability and economy.

In conclusion, there are a number of advantages of gaining knowledge by travel and TV and the internet. By the end of the day, the benefits of enriching knowledge from TV and the internet dominate those from travel, persuading me to concur with accessing knowledge bases on TV and the internet. In the fact, knowledge that we get today is mainly thanks to TV and the internet.

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The fact that obtaining knowledge from travel or TV and the internet is discussed by various societies. While the travel brings an effortless memory thanks to real experiences, easy approach and low cost are advantages that TV and the internet generate. As far as I am concerned that it is more beneficial to enrich knowledge from TV and the internet.        

On the one hand, due to a chance of real experiences and knowledge that people perceive from travel is remembered readily. To commence with, travelers hear with their own ears and see with their own eyes could be experienced by their ears and eyes, thus having confidence in things that arising from real exposure. When there is no doubt about a information, people are likely to absorb immediately this information. More remarkably, not only does information from travel create the trust but also the attraction and deep understanding. Being accessed to real images and activities that struck travelers are acts of human such as local culture, cuisine and landscape. Accordingly, both the trust and attraction of things from travel bring good memory about these.

On the other hand, TV and the internet help to have knowledge that is effortless approach and gains with lower cost. First and foremost, knowledge as well as information enriched by TV and the internet finds it easy to access because of social network and tools, namely, computers, cell-phone and high quality of internet service. Additionally, watching a program TV or network access to know an issue is lower cost than travel. Instead of having to cover accommodation and traveling expense, people may just stay at home, while still seeing diverse knowledge. Hence, obtaining great learning from TV and the internet is reasonable due to its approachability and economy.

In conclusion, there are a number of (numerous) advantages of gaining knowledge by travel and TV and the internet. By the end of the day, the benefits of enriching knowledge from TV and the internet dominate those from travel, persuading me to concur with accessing knowledge bases on TV and the internet. In the fact, knowledge that we get today is mainly thanks to TV and the internet.

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