It is undeniable that the internet has witnessed a momentous leap and teenagers nowadays tend to be more reliant on the internet. From my point of view, I would say that the internet has some downsides which should be highly limited. Nevertheless, it should not be banned for educational purposes for some justifications.
First and foremost, the internet is extremely convenient and the progression of students’ educational results is ascribed to the internet. In other words, thanks to the internet, teenagers now can freely access to abundant sources of information. Besides, the internet is regarded as a tool to communicate and keep in touch with friends and educators, which enable them to exchange their ideas and seek for help to deal with their difficulties. Therefore, such acitivities would enhance pupils' accademic performance at school.( Is this help to consolidate your viewpoint?)
On the other hand, notwithstanding the aforementioned advantages, the disadvantages of the internet should not be neglected. Firstly, the internet can be used for deteriorated purposes. For example, students can use the internet to copy available material and illegally make it become their own. Besides, their critical thinking and creativity can be eroded considerably by their strongly indepence on the internet. Moreover, private information can be leaked easily due to the appearance of hackers which can eventually deprive many people of their privacy.
In conclusion, I would opine that internet use should be limited in some aspects but not restricted for educational purposes because of its substantial benefits offered to the users.
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