Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 - 17/08/2019

Question

TOPIC task 2 ngày 17/08/2019: 

Some people argue that we should do research into their family history. Others, agree with the view that we should focus on the present and future generations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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People’s opinion that individuals should conduct studies into history of family. Some have an opposite idea, which reference people to focus on the present and future generations. As a Vietnamese person, I would give my credit to both ideas and discuss as below.

On the one hand, individuals should notice on history of ancestor and there are some reason to explain it. Firstly, they would know some interesting and useful information  in some cases. Secondly, it satisfies the curiosity of certain people as it is one of powerful characteristic, which is like a trigger leading us to take action. Finally, this kind of knowledge helps every person to be motivated for any challenge. For example, my grandfather usually tells me about a string of hard moments that he met in wartime, and these images remind how issues of mine is tiny, which encourage to over any challenge.   

On the other hand, people should concentrate on the present and future generations as it can be changed to be better. It implies that we are living in present and continue to move forward into the future, and are not able to do or change anything in the past. Furthermore, individuals follow the advice, which mean they are mature and do have responsibility to themselves, families and society. For instance, the brain of humans being is limited if someone focuses intensively on relatives or ancestors, which leads  ignoring their current stuff such as jobs, families, friends.

In conclusion, I do confirm that both ideas have its implication, which help you overcome challenges or harsh situations. It also contains no drawback.

 

 

 

Answer 1

People’s opinions that individuals should conduct studies into on the history of a family. Some have an opposite(a different)  idea, which references people to focus on the present and future generations. As a Vietnamese person, I would give my credit to both ideas(repeated => statements) and discuss them as below.

On the one hand, individuals should notice on the history of an ancestor, and there are some reason to explain it. Firstly, they would know some interesting and useful information  in some cases. Secondly, it satisfies the curiosity of certain(overused => individual) people as it is one of the powerful(overused => dominant)characteristics, which is like a trigger leading us to take action. Finally, this kind of knowledge helps every person to be motivated for any challenge. For example, my grandfather usually tells me about a string of hard moments that he met in wartime, and these images remind how issues of mine is are tiny, which encourage me to over any challenge.   

On the other hand, people should concentrate on the present and future generations as it can be changed to be better. It implies that we are living in present and continue to move forward into the future, and are not able to do or change anything in the past.(Too many non-content words. Consider rewriting => Indeed, we are living in this contemporary society and continuously moving forward to the future since people could do nothing in an attempt to change the past.) Furthermore, individuals follow the advice, which means they are mature and do have the responsibility to themselves, families, and society. For instance, the brain of humans being is limited if someone focuses intensively on relatives or ancestors, which leads to ignoring their current stuff such as jobs, families, friends.

In conclusion, I do confirm that both ideas have its their implications, which help you overcome challenges or harsh situations. It also contains no drawbacks.