Students should take a part-time job. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Justify your answer.(100-150 words)

Question

From my point of view, students should take a part-time job. First of all, working part-time helps students earn more money to cover everyday needs. They won't have to depend on their family. This is very good, especially for students have difficult circumstances. Secondly, working part-time is useful for students' study. It assists them to widen their knowledge and have good communications skills. For example, students who are studying English should take a part-time job in some famous places where have many foreigners. Therefore, they can practice English by being  a tour guide. Finally, working part-time helps students have a good preparation for their future. However, I can't deny that taking a part-time job also has many bad effects such as studying becomes worse or being tired of working too much... In conclusion, I think students should take a part-time job but not too much.

Answer 1

Everyday needs - daily needs

bad effects = negative consequences

but not too much = but ensure to maintain the work- life balance

especially for students have difficult circumstances = especially for students having difficult circumstances