'Travelling widens our knowledge.' Do you agree or disagree? Write a paragraph of about 120-150 words to express your opinion.

Question

I strongly concur with the statement that traveling widens our knowledge. Firstly, it is undoubted that trips bring us a chance to experience new things. We can get more understanding about the world around us in every aspect such as society, geology or biology. We can try the food that we have never seen before or visit the places that we have just seen in books and magazines. Secondly, when traveling we can meet a variety of people. It is a good way for us to improve our behavior and communicating skills and apparently, we can better ourselves. Last but not least, traveling fosters our good characters such as confidence, bravery, and so on, which is absolutely advantageous to us in our life. In conclusion, it is irrefutable that by traveling we can widen our knowledge.

Answer 1

seen > eaten 

a variety of people > a variety of types of people 

we can better ourselves > we can make ourselves better individuals

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it is irrefutable that by traveling we can widen our knowledge.  > it goes without saying that by means of travelling, we are able to discover a new horizon of knowledge and train ourselves to be good individuals in our later life.