it is acceptable to eat pets. disagree or agree?

Question

I completely disagree about eating dogs.Dogs is always the best friend of human, eating dog is betrayal of that friendship. Dogs are really friendly, lovely, loyal and specially intelligent. First, they are puppies who are really lovely that they are tiny like the baby like a cotton ball. Second, dogs are friendly that they can play with your parents, your friends. In addition, dogs always play and stay by your side when you  are sad or lonely. It makes us feel happy and comfortable. Third, puppies are very loyal, they never betray you, whenever they follow you wherever you need. Though one day you will throw away them, certainly they will still love you as the way you did. Finally, they are very intelligent. Sometime, dogs protect and play with your kids. They are the best honest friends with your children. A dog sits next to you on the sofa while you watch TV, or sleep on the bed at night. And a dog jumps around and wags its tail when its best friend comes home. A thief recently stole the dogs more and more, so how to protect your pets. We should keep pets inside with you and your family, remove common poison. Don't leave your pets unattended outdoors, keep your dogs on a leash.

Answer 1

bài viết của bạn không phải là writing task 2 đâu nhỉ ? nhưng cũng đáng là 1 body hay trong writing. Bài viết của bạn nếu để nộp bào cô giáo thì ok nhưng là một body trong ielts task 2 thì có lẽ hơi ít từ vựng cao, but anyway thì 6.0 ấy vì toàn bộ ngữ pháp và từ vựng bạn dùng không complex but true :))

Comments

yeah, it’s just the homework in my school :)))