Bài IELTS Task 1 trong Complete IELTS 6.5

Question

The figure gives data for the difficulties people have when they come to live abroad.

In general, based on the chart, there are three problems for people living in foreign countries. It is surveyed on three groups of age. Learning the local language with people over 55 is the trouble having highest percent.

Making friends problem obtains about 46 percents and this number decrease when people become older. It is just above 20 percent for people over 55. There is 40 percent of people from 18 to 54 getting difficulties in finding somewhere to live while fewer people over 55 have this problem ( just 23%). The number of people between 18 and 34 finding it hard to learn the local language is approximately 30 percent and this quantity increases by 5 percent for people aged 35-54. As we can see that a number of people over 55 having trouble in learning language are nearly 55 percent, it is more than the others very much

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The figure gives data for => gives data on the difficulties people have when they come to live abroad.

In general, based on the chart, there are three problems for people living in foreign countries. It is surveyed on three groups of age. Learning the local language with people over 55 is the trouble having highest percent. => the highest percent

Making friends problem obtains about 46 percents and this number decrease => the number decreases when people become older. It is just above 20 percent for people over 55. There is 40 percent of people from 18 to 54 getting difficulties in finding somewhere to live while fewer people over 55 have this problem ( just 23%). The number of people between 18 and 34 finding it hard to learn the local language is approximately 30 percent and this quantity increases by 5 percent for people aged 35-54. As we can see that a number of people over 55 having trouble in learning language are nearly 55 percent, it is more than the others very much

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