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It is undeniable that watching TV helps some children TO learn more efficiently. While many people think that children should watch TV frequently both in school and at home, I completely disagree with this point of view.
There are several drawbacks of watching TV. Only because of being exposed to TV programs frequently can children be addictive and suffer negative consequences. Hardly do children watching TV in school have time to learn.
For instance, many children, nowadays, spend a lot of time on watching TV, which results in the lack of responsibilities for homework. Secondly, Secondly, watching TV could eventually lead to the sedentary lifestyle as children tend to pay significant attention
to TV and ignore other activities. If it weren’t for watching TV, children would take part in outdoor activities and sports which are better for their physical and intellectual development.
Another reason against this opinion is that it is difficult for parents to control what children watch on TV. Children who are exposed to the high frequency of violent movies on TV may imitae this behavior in their life and grow mor aggressive.
By dint of having access with programs on TV, children could be affected by news which are distorted the truth by journalists for the sake of profit
In conclusion, not only be watching TV uncontrollable, but it is also the root cause of the enormous impacts on children. As a result, I am strongly against the view that it is necessary for children to regularly watch TV regardless of in school or at home.