How do you celebrate holidays or celebrations with your own families?

Question

Birthday party is a traditional celebration of my family. When the birthday of a member in my family is coming, the others will celebrate a party. Take the 18^th birthday party of my oldest sister as an example. During she was studying at school, I, my older sister and my parents set up the party at home. My father bought a beautiful delicious birthday cake, which had a cute buffalo on the surface. My mother cooked a hearty meal. I and my older sister blew bubbles in order to decorate our house with flowers and ribbon. We also helped my mother cook. When the principal character came back, everything had been done. She was very surprised and happy. My father lighted eighteen candles on the cake while we were singing the birthday song. Then my oldest sister closed her eyes, put her hands together in front of her chest and said her wish. After that, she blew all the candles and we had a great dinner together. I love that traditional celebration of my family.

Answer 1

Birthday party is a traditional celebration of my family. When the birthday of a member in my family is coming, the others will celebrate this particular event in a party. Take the 18th birthday party of my oldest sister as an example. During she was studying at school, I, my older sister and my parents set up the party at home. My father bought a beautiful delicious birthday cake, which had a cute buffalo on the surface. My mother cooked a hearty meal. I and my older sister blew bubbles in order to decorate our house with flowers and ribbon. We also helped my mother cook. When the principal character came back, everything had been done. She was very surprised and happy. My father lighted eighteen candles on the cake while we were singing the birthday song. Then my oldest sister closed her eyes, put her hands (together)in front of her chest and said her wish. After that, she blew all the candles and we had a great dinner together. I love that traditional celebration of my family.

Answer 2

Birthday party is a traditional celebration of my family. When the birthday of a member in my family is coming, the others (other members) will celebrate (hold) a party. (To take/taking) Take the 18^th birthday party of my oldest sister as an example. During she was studying at school, I, my older sister and my parents set up the party at home. My father bought a beautiful delicious birthday cake, which had a cute buffalo on the surface (it). My mother cooked (prepared) a hearty meal. I and my older sister blew bubbles in order to decorate our house with flowers and ribbon. We also helped my mother cook. When the principal character came back, everything had been done. She was very surprised and happy. My father lighted eighteen candles on the cake while we were singing the birthday song. Then my oldest sister closed her eyes, put her hands together in front of her chest and said her wish. After that, she blew all the candles and we had a great dinner together. I love that traditional celebration of my family.