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“Prevention is better than cure." Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures.”

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Diseases are now seriously threatening to our planet. In this world, billions of people have been dead because of various types of health problems such as epidemic diseases, incurable illness, obesity,… This is the reason why the government expend a huge amount of country’s heath finances for cure related education as well as preventative measures.

Over centuries, people have to suffer new sort of diseases which is hard to cure and interfered. By using technological advancement, some kind of illnesses are sovled. Nevertheless, many types of them have not been cured or the cost of the treatment is very expensive. So far so good, this is not the best way to protect people’s health.

It is found out that each diseases has a suitable way to penetrate and harm to our body. If we research and clog the way for the illness to intrude, we can prevent them from harming our lives better than spend a huge proportion of money to treat the victims. This is the effective way to protect our health frequently and durably.

Through health education, effectual preventative measure can be extended to all of people. As an example, if the government determines the reason of health problems for human bodies are smoking, drinking and so on, by the educational programs, people can realize that they are harmful for them and stop  thus they will be attacked by severe diseases. This also could save a large amount of money of the state.

In the nutshell, health education and preventative measure should be promoted as it helps protect people health affectively as well as bring colossal economical benefit to the government.

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Answer 1

 

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Diseases are now seriously threatening to our planet.  Billions of people around the world have been killed  because of various types of health problems such as epidemic diseases, incurable illness  { không được dùng dấu ba chấm sau such as}.This is the reason why the government expend a huge amount of money  on health education as well as preventative measures.

For  centuries, people have been suffering from  new sorts of disease which are hard to cure and interfere. By using advanced technology , some kind of illnesses are treated . Nevertheless, others have  no cure or the cost of the treatment is fairly  expensive. For long- term , Treatment is not the best way to protect people’s health. ( ý đoạn này chưa được logic lắm, mình chưa nghĩ ra đc cách sửa ..hehe)

It is found  that each diseases has  distinguish way to penetrate and harm to our body.  By discovering  the way of intrusion of germs , we can prevent them from harming our health . It is obviously better than spending a huge proportion of money to treat the patients. This is more  effective way to protect our health frequently and durably.

Through health education, effectual preventative measure can be extended to all of people. For instance, thanks to  the educational programs, people can realize that smoking and drinking are so harmful  that  will cause severe diseases. Therefore, most people will try to abstain from alcohol and smoke. Generally, it enables people to avoid bad habits and build good routine for their health. It is also  a good method of saving up not only for individual but gorvernment as well.

In the nutshell, health education and preventative measure should be implemented  as it helps protect people health effectively as well as bring colossal economical benefit to the government.

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Answer 2

Diseases are now seriously threatening to our planet.  Billions of people around the world have been killed  because of various types of health problems such as epidemic diseases, incurable illness  { không được dùng dấu ba chấm sau such as}.This is the reason why the government expend a huge amount of money  on health education as well as preventative measures.

For  centuries, people have been suffering from  new sorts of disease which are hard to cure and interfere. By using advanced technology , some kind of illnesses are treated . Nevertheless,others have  no cure or the cost of the treatment is fairly  expensive. For long- term , Treatmentis not the best way to protect people’s health. ( ý đoạn này chưa được logic lắm, mình chưa nghĩ ra đc cách sửa ..hehe)

It is found  that each diseases has  distinguish way to penetrate and harm to our body.  By discovering  the way of intrusion of germs , we can prevent them from harming our health . It is obviously better than spending a huge proportion of money to treat the patients. This is more  effective way to protect our health frequently and durably.

Through health education, effectual preventative measure can be extended to all of people. For instance, thanks to  the educational programs, people can realize that smoking and drinking are so harmful  that  will cause severe diseases. Therefore, most people will try to abstain from alcohol and smoke. Generally, it enables people to avoid bad habits and build good routine for their health. It is also  a good method of saving up not only for individual but gorvernment as well.

In the nutshell, health education and preventative measure should be implemented  as it helps protect people health effectively as well as bring colossal economical benefit to the government.