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Question

The line graph shows the number of visits to Music Choice website and Pop Parade website in 15 days. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the number of visits to both sites fluctuated dramatically during 15 days

Starting with Music Choice website, 40,000 people went to this new site on the first day. Half of them backed off the next day then this number rose dramatically to 60,000 people. However for some reason, it dropped again at the same level on day 2. Between day 4 and day 11 this raised with a plateau a little bit of just t above 20,000. Afterwards, it surged dramatically and overtook the number of visits to Pop Parade website at 120,000 people then increasing slightly. Finally, it went down sharply to less than 80.000 people.

Meanwhile, The Pop Parade net sites were visited by 120,000 music lovers on day one which decreased slightly on the next day after that regaining the same fame on the 3rd day. Afterwards, this dropped slowly, reaching the lowest of the period but on day 9 it soared dramatically to over 140,000 people on day 11 then it decreased sharply to 80,000 people on day 13. Finally, it reached over 160,000 people on the last day.

In the end of the period, Pop sites were visited by maximum viewers of 180,000 whereas sites located to Music Choice were not explored by more than 80,000 explorers on the last day of the report.

Answer 1

The line graph shows the number of visits to Music Choice website and Pop Parade website in 15 days. Overall, it can be clearly seen that the number of visits to figures for both sites fluctuated dramatically during 15 days

Starting with Music Choice website, 40,000 people went to this new site on the first day. The next day saw merely half of that number.  rose dramatically Despite the dramatic rise of 40,000 to 60,000 views following, (However) for some reason it dropped again at to the same level on day 2. bottom two days before. Between day 4 and day 11 this raised with a plateau a little bit of just t above 20,000. there were slight variations but only reached 40,000 views at most.  Nonetheless, on the 11th day it surged dramatically and overtook the number of visits to Pop Parade website at with 120,000 people. After the last subtle increase, the trend finally went down sharply to less than 80.000 people.

Meanwhile, The Pop Parade net website were visited by 120,000 music lovers on day one, figures then decreased slightly on the next day after that regaining the same fame on the 3rd day. there were not many changes in figures within 3 days. Afterwards,Later the trend dropped slowly, almost reached the lowest of the period point but on day 9 it soared substantially to over 140,000 people on day 11 then it decreased sharply to 80,000 people on day 13. In the end, it reached over 160,000 people on the last day.

In the end of the period, Pop sites were visited by maximum viewers of 180,000 whereas sites located to Music Choice were not explored by more than 80,000 explorers on the last day of the report.