Question

Bài Task 1 trong Test 3 quyển Cam 10. Mình cám ơn!

Answer 1

The chart illustrates the paths graduates and post graduates who were non full-time workers chose after college which include four domains (part-time work, voluntary work, further study, and unemployment) in the UK in 2008. ( dùng đại từ quan hệ which ở đây mình nghĩ là sai rùi. Bạn có thể tách ra viết thành một câu khác)

Overall, the number of British graduates was significantly higher than the counterpart ( từ này mình ko nghĩ dùng dc trong case này đâu, chắc chắn thì nên dùng đúng từ post graduates). Additionally, the year 2008 witnessed a striking resemblance in both the most and the least widely chosen destination (further study and voluntary work respectively) between the groups given ( more than 2 groups thì dùng among ko dùng between).

In terms of further study, it is this option that was the most popular among both graduate and post graduate students (29665 and 2725 correspondingly) -> the largest number of graduate and post graduate students continues to study after college, at 26665 and 2725 students respectively . Similarly ( sao lại similarly dc phải là by contrast vì một cái là số lượng nhiều và một cái là số lượng ít phải đối lập nhau chứ), voluntary work was chosen by merely 3500 graduates and 345 post graduates, making this the least favored option.

Nevertheless, the proportion of part-time worker ( họ cung cấp con số chứ có cung cấp phần trăm đâu nên ko dc dùng proportion) in UK post graduates was considerably higher than that in graduates with just over 2500, which was nearly twice as much as 1625 unemployed postgraduates whereas there was a close gap between 17735 of the former and 16235 of the latter in UK graduates ( từ chỗ which bạn tách ra viết thành câu khác ai lại một đoạn chỉ có một câu dài vô tận thế)