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The line graph compares four distinguished modes of transport in term of the number of goods that they transported in the United Kingdom over the period from 1994 to 2002.

Overall, the total number of merchandise rose significantly. The most considerable increase was seen in transportation by road.

In 1974, around 70 million tonnes of goods were carried by road, compared to about 40 and 38 million tonnes transported by rail and water, respectively. The pipeline was responsible for just about 5 million tonnes.

While road played a role as the transport mode that conveyed the largest weight of goods, reaching nearly 100 million of tonnes in 2002, the figure for pipeline still remained at lowest level during the period of time although it saw an increase in mass of transported goods. It peaked at around 22 million of tonnes in 1995 and stood at the same value until 2002.

Only rail saw considerably decrease in the quantities of merchandise between 1994 and 2002, but it rose back to just above 40 million tonnes in 2002. In contrast, although water carried goods as much as rail until 1978, after that time the transportation by water was used more interestingly. It remained high quantities of around 60 million tonnes for almost half of the time period shown before falling a small number in 1998 then peaking at about 65 million tonnes in 2002.