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Question

The table gives information of the percentage of different categories of mamilies living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

As can be seen that , the rate of sole parent had the greatest 21 %  (232.000) people .Similarly , the amount of people in the single and no children was singnificant higher than the rate of couple with children 19 % (359.000) people and 12 % (933.000) people respectively , the number of people from couple with no children accounted for 7 % (211.000)  residents . While , the proportion of the residents from aged couple is lower than the residents from single aged person 4% (48.000) and 6%(54.000) civilians .Finally , the rate of all households takes up 11 % (1.837.000) population .

Inconclustion , the proportion in the sole parent had the largerest compares other type family.

Answer 1

The table gives information of describes the percentage of different categories of mamilies the poor household living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

Overall / General speaking / Generally... ???? (thiếu phần này)

As can be seen that , the rate of sole parent had the greatest 21 %  (232.000) people .Similarly , the amount of people in the single and no children was singnificant higher than the rate of couple with children 19 % (359.000) people and 12 % (933.000) people respectively , the number of people from couple with no children accounted for 7 % (211.000)  residents . While , the proportion of the residents from aged couple is was lower than the residents from single aged person 4% (48.000) and 6%(54.000) civilians .Finally , the rate of all households takes up (made up) 11 % (1.837.000) population .

(phải có sự so sánh giữa các đối tượng, cái nào cao nhất / thấp nhất..., cái này hơn cái kia bao nhiêu lần... nhưng không nên đưa quá nhiều số liệu, sẽ gây rối mắt)

Inconclustion , the proportion in the sole parent had the largerest compares other type family. (không cần inconclusion cho task 1)

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