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Question

The bar chart presents the different level of post school qualifications in Australia and the percentage of female and males who held the in 1999.

As can be seen that ,the skilled vocational diploma from group males  had the greatest 90 %  . While  the postgraduate diploma from men is greater than the figure master’s degree 70 % and 60 % respectively .Incontrast , the undergraduate diploma from males was significantly higher than the beachelor’s degree 40 % and 48 % respectively .

Turing to the groups women , the undergraduate diploma had the greatest 70% , the bachelor’s degree accounted for 55 %  and the master’s degree is larger than the postgraduate diploma 40 % and 30% respectively .Incontrast , the skilld vocational diploma is the lowest over 10 % .

Inconclusion , the rate of men in post school qualifications in Australia is higher than the number of women.

Answer 1

As can be seen that ,the skilled vocational diploma from group males had the greatest 90 %  occupied the greatest share, with precisely 90 %. While,  the postgraduate diploma from men is greater than the figure master’s degree with/at 70 % and compared to 60 % respectively. In contrast, the undergraduate diploma from males was significantly higher than the beachelor’s degree with/at 40 % and 48 % respectively .

Turing to the groups women , the undergraduate diploma had the greatest 70% made up the greatest propotion ( 90% ).the bachelor’s degree accounted for 55 %  and the master’s degree is larger than the postgraduate diploma with 40 % and 30% respectively in that order ( tránh lặp từ ).In contrast , the skilld vocational diploma is the lowest slightly over 10 %