Dear Host Family (exchange student)- các anh chị giúp em ạ! E cảm ơn nhiều lắmmmm!!!
8,113 views
0 votes
0 votes
Dear hostfamily,

First of all, I would like to thank you for reading my letter and spending time on getting to know me better. We never met – so I hope the following lines will give you an impression about me, my life in Vietnam  and why I would like to spend a year in the USA.

My name is Nhi,(but you can call me Win as an English name) and I’m a 16 years old girl. I live in Bien Hoa city- a small and peaceful city in Vietnam .Currently, I am a student In Luong The Vinh high school which is the best school in my hometown. Generally, I can say for sure that I’m quite good at Literature and Biology because my of my passion in reading book. Before my graduation, I think of taking some time out of my academic program to have a different life experience. I am already aware that being an exchange student is very challenging, but I am ready for this journey.My family describe me as an cheerful, outgoing and a little adventurous. I love a good challenge and that is the reason why I choose to be an exchange student.I also have a very positive outlook on life and I think it’s important to treat everyday as special.I come from a nuclear family ,just my parents and me. My dad works a lot, as a controller, but I’ll always be his little girl. My mother work from home as an accoutant .Sometimes she teahces me to play Organ so I can play a little bit. Although we are busy with our work, but we are a very close-knit family. I consider myself very lucky.

If a family could choose a student, they should choose me because I am fun to be around and I can make a new friend in a second. I can easily get along with any member of your family. I am very unique because I am open to new things to try. I love animals, so if you have a pet we would bond well. You will not find anyone else like me.I like to read or write stories.They open many doors and inspire me very much. I like to dance also. I am a pretty good singer and I love all different types of music like hip-hop, rock, pop,… I cannot live without music. I play the piano and the organ but I would really like to play  acoustic guitar.

My typical schoolday starts at 5 a:m. Getting up early is not difficult for me because I love the fresh and peaceful atmosphere in the morning. At school I love to talk with friends and join the club. Unfortunately my school doesn’t have many clubs or groups, so when I go o the U.S , I will join many groups. At weekend, I have more free time to do what I love. So I starts my new dayby jogging , then go out with my parents and have the other leisure activities.

One of my biggest dream is to travel around the world and I believe that being an exchange student would be a great opportunity for me to learn more about American Culture and gain valuable experiences in a different environment. Actually, I went to an English camp held by a university in HCM city for 5 days, and I try to speak english as much as possible therby improving my skills.

 I want to meet you very much. As I spend more time with you , I’ll get to know you better. I would like to share with you my culture , help you cook some delicious Vietnamese food  , tell you about our Tet- the New Year’s eve, …. I am glad to share my culture with you.

To be one of your family members is one of the happiest thing in my life. I hope that I can learn many things  from you and your family during stayin in the US. I hope you are happy to see me!

I am looking forward to the year I’ll spend and the good times I’ll have with your family.

Until I see you, I wish you take care and have good days!

Sincerely yours,

Lam Nhi

     ( email address: [email protected])
by
0 points

Please log in or register to answer this question.

1 Answer

0 votes
0 votes

Dear hostfamily,

First of all, I would like to thank you for reading my letter and spending time on getting to know me better. We have never met before – so I hope the following lines will give you an impression about me, my life in Vietnam  and why I would like to spend a year in the USA.

My name is Nhi (you can call me Win as an English name) and I’m a 16-year-old girl. I live in Bien Hoa city- a small and peaceful city in Vietnam .Currently, I am a student In Luong The Vinh high school which is the best school in my hometown. Generally, I can say for sure that I’m quite good at Literature and Biology partly because of my passion in reading book. Before my graduation, I think it would be great to take some time out of my academic program to have a different life experience. I am already aware that being an exchange student is very challenging but I am ready for this journey. My family describe me as a cheerful, outgoing and a little adventurous. I love challenges which is also my reason for choosing to be an exchange student.I also have a very positive outlook on life and I think it is important to treat everyday as a special day. My nuclear family includes my parents and me. My father, who is incredibly industrious, works as a controller. My mother works from home as an accountant. Sometimes she teaches me to play the Organ so I can play a little bit. Although we are busy with our own work, but we are a very close-knit family. I consider myself very lucky.

If a family chooses a student, they should choose me because I am fun to be around and I can make new friends in a second. I can easily get along with any member of the family. I am very unique because I am open to new things. I love animals, so if you have one we would get on well. I like to read or write stories.They open many doors and inspire me very much. I like to dance also. I am a pretty good singer and I love all different types of music like hip-hop, rock, pop,etc. I cannot live without music. I play the piano and the organ but I would really like to play acoustic guitar.

My typical schoolday starts at 5 a:m. Getting up early is not difficult for me because I love the fresh and peaceful atmosphere in the morning. At school I love to talk with friends and join the club. Unfortunately my school doesn’t have many clubs or groups, so when I go to the U.S , I will try to join in a lot of suitable groups. At weekend, I have more free time to do what I love so I start my new day by jogging , then go out with my parents and do other leisure activities.
 

by
59 points

1 comment

One of my biggest dream is to travel around the world and I believe that being an exchange student would be a great opportunity for me to learn more about American Culture and gain valuable experiences in a different environment. Actually, I went to an English camp held by a university in Ho Chi Minh city for 5 days, and I try to speak English as much as possible thereby improving my skills.

 I want to meet you very much. As we spend more time together , we will eventually get to know each other better. I would like to share my culture with you , help you cook some delicious Vietnamese cuisine, tell you about our Tet- the New Year’s Eve,etc I am glad to share my culture with you.


To be one of your family members is one of the happiest things in my life. I hope that I can learn many things  from you and your family during my stay in the US. I hope you are happy to see me!

I am looking forward to the year I’ll spend and the good times I’ll have with your family.
 

Until I see you, I wish you take care and have good days!

Sincerely yours,

Lam Nhi

enlightenedOverall

Mình xin phép nói tiếng Việt nha !

Ý của bạn rất tốt. Lá thư này nói lên rất nhiều về bạn cũng như mong muốn cháy bỏng của bạn. Tuy nhiên bạn cần để ý một số chỗ cần chia động từ và quan trọng hơn, là cách sắp xếp các câu trong đoạn văn. Đôi chỗ mình để ý thấy câu văn không hợp với ngữ cảnh của đoạn, một phần có lẽ vì cách viết văn Việt Nam nhưng không sao, bạn rất biết cách đưa thông tin về bản thân vào bài.  Mình mới chỉ chữa phần ngữ pháp và một số phần câu cú trong đoạn văn. Bạn có thể tự mình chỉnh sửa thêm.

Đặc biệt là phần một ngày học tập bạn nhé. Khúc đầu bạn có nói đến dậy vào lúc 5h rồi sau đó không nhắc gì đến giờ giấc nữa mà nói chung chung thôi. Bạn có thể cân nhắc phần này.

Cảm ơn bạn đã đọc. Đây chỉ là một số nhận xét chủ quan của bản thân mình.

 

Related questions

0 votes
0 votes
2 answers