Topic 9. Water is in short supply in many countries of the world, but consumption of water by families is increasing. Why is this happening? What can be done to preserve water?

Question

In recent years, an increasing number of people are concerned about the consumption of 

 

water. The expenditure of water is rapidly grow, so, in many countries, citizens do not 

 

have enough water to use in daily life. Why water is shortage and what people should do 

 

to prevent these problems. All of these issues will be clearly illustrated in this essay.

 

First of all, it is obvious, the main reason which causes lack of clean water is global 

 

warming. This is because, iceberg will be melted by high temperature which leads to 

 

rapidly increase sea level. As a result, fresh water will be combined with salt water which 

 

cause short of clean water for people.

 

Besides, industry is also another reason which carries shortage water. It means that, some 

 

laboratories will let waste out rivers or sea without treatment. Consequently, not only 

 

does water make polluted water, but it also leads to death of creatures as well as changing 

 

suddenly genes such as fish or turtle.

 

In facts, lack of water is a big issue with which inhabitant need to deal. There are some 

 

ways to face this challenge. Firstly, government is supposed to enact the law like going 

 

up the taxes to manufactures can be useful to limit amount number tone of waste to 

 

ocean. Secondly, authorities should encourage citizens to use recycled items to reduce the 

 

trash.

 

In conclusion, the are many reasons which cause short of water. However, it is clear that 

 

people are the main reason of these problems. In my opinion, the only way to deal with 

 

these issue is that people need to increase their consciousness in protection environment.

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