"Fatherhood ought to be emphasised as much as motherhood that they are also responsible for bringing the children up" To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Question

In modern society, the children should be fed by both the father and mother because they have equal role in taking responsibilities to their children, also family. I obsolutely agree with this ideas.

Nowaday, bringing children up is not only responsible of women but also of man in which they will share duties together to make the best condition for their children, and father alway plays important role in these targets because of some reasons.

Firstly, man should contribute money to giving a good condition of education and the life for children, they are considered as financial key in the family that will make them to be more mature and serious thinking of earning money because they know that they can give their children a best environment sduty if they have enough money. For example, my friend, she has sufficent condition to give her little boy to study at Internation school with costly, of course he can learn English very well comparing with other one.

Secondly, it is better to look after children by father because their partner also works outside for earning money and they come back home with exhausted body, therefore the man should share doing some duties at home with their wife as taking a bath for babies that is also a good time to get more understanding and closer between father and children, to play game or crack a jock with them in free time. There are a lot of evidences which shows that the children will have good behaviours if they are taken are by happy family, they will rarely involve in aggressive actions.

Thirdly, father plays important role in education of children because they gives educational trend, teaches them about kindness, braving and makes major decisions that makes them becoming a good mirror in eyes of their children to try doing every thing with their best in sduty and in the life with pround of their father in the heart.

In conclusion. sharing responsibilities in bringing babies up with their partner for making the good conditions to develope well is duty of the father. I believe that the man is ready to take these duties to make their children to be better.

Answer 1

In modern society( Vì cái này là áp dụng cho tất cả các thời, k riêng gì thời nay, It is  a known fact that), family is the most important place for the children to be nurtured and educated before stepping out society . Therefore, it is absolutely equal for fathers share responsibility of bringing their children up with mothers.

Nowadays, bringing children up is not only responsibility of women but also of man which they will share duties together to make the best condition for their children, and father alway plays important role in these targets because of some reasons.

Firstly, man should contribute money to giving a good condition of education and the life for children. They are considered as financial key in the family, which encourages them to be more mature and serious in thinking of earning money. For example, one of my friend has sufficient condition to give her little boy to study at International school with costly, of course he can learn English very well compared with other one.( Vd không rõ ràng)

Secondly, it is better for fathers to look after their children because their partners also work outside for earning money and they come back home with exhausted body. In this case, the man should share doing some duties at home with their wives as well as warm up the relationship between kids and dad by taking a bath for babies; play game or crack a jock with them in free time. There are a lot of evidences which shows that the children will have good behaviours if they are taken are by happy family, they will rarely involve in aggressive actions.( đưa ví dụ cụ thể hơn, nên có số liệu hoặc nghiên cứu)

Thirdly, father plays important role in education of children because they gives educational trend, teaches them about kindness, braving and makes major decisions that makes them becoming a good mirror for children to try do everything with their best in study and in the life with proudness of their father in the heart.( lủng củng quá!!)
 

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