Distance-learning programmes and attending college or university.
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Many people use distance-learning programmes ( study material, post, TV, t he Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it can not bring the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about the most effective way to learn. However, whether people use distance-learning programmes or attend college has caused a heated debate.  My view is that learning in university has much more benefits than using distance-learning method.

First, it is obvious that for most students, having teachers available to ask questions and back their up is fabulous, which can foster students not waste time on sparing no effort to understand the whole lessons. This means that they will have more time to do different activities for their own sake. Therefore, it is crucial for students to attend the institutions.

Moreover, soft skills can be boosted during the time learning in universities. For example, how to accquire teamwork skills has become a hot topic after many companies regard the employees as unqualified due to their lack of teamwork skill. If graduates can know some know-how about teamwork, they will find not only a job in the future but also a satisfactory one.  

That is not to say that using distance learning programe does not have its advantages. There are, of course, students interested in learning by themselves, so they can explore every corner of the subject which can enhance their creativity and indepedence. But unfornately, these people are few.

In conclusion, students should attend universities to acquire nessesary knowledge and skills in order to guarantee a higher rate of employment, thus making the society well.  Meanwhile, we should not overlook the key role of self-learning of one students. By doing so, we can make sure that students will experience a fun and dynamic learning environment. 

P.s: This is my very first effort to write an ielts writing task 2. ToT Actually, what you guys can see, I followed the model in "Marvellous technique for ielts writing". :D But I still meet trouble when dealing with the vocabulary and how to explain my idea. It's expected that you guys will help me with my essaay. T___T Please please. Thank you. 

 

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Trước tiên xin cảm ơn cậu ạ :D Nhưng cậu có thể cho mình hỏi một vài câu đc ko ạ ^^ 

1. Cậu có thể cho mình hỏi mình đưa ra solutions ở đâu vậy ạ ToT Cảm ơn cậu.

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1. Đề bài yêu cầu thế nào thì bạn hãy làm y như vậy.

Chẳng hạn như đề này thì bạn chỉ nêu ra giải pháp và giải thích tại sao:

As the number of private cars has increased, so too has the level of pollution in many cities. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?

Còn đề bài của bạn là: To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Nếu bạn đưa ra giải pháp tức là không trả lời thẳng vào câu hỏi rồi còn gì.

 

Ý mình là, trong bài của mình, câu nào của mình khiến bạn nghĩ mình đang nêu ra giải pháp ạ :3

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