IELTS-Task 1(line graph)-birth rate

Question

The line graph illustrate the fertilities in China and the USA from 1920 to 2000. At first glance it is clear that both nations had the considerable fluctuation in birth rates.

At the beginning of the period, the number of births in China had vary from 1920 and reached at 15 percent in 1935. In the next 5 years, this birth rate plunged significantly by 10 percent from 15 percent to 5 percent. In around 1950, 15 percent of birth rate increased and reached a peak of 20 percent. The rest of the line, this percentage went down to 3 percent in 2000.

The general trend in fertility of USA had fluctuated slightly between 11 percent and 13 percent prior to 1940. It then fell to the lowest point at under 5 percent in 1945 and the following 5 years saw a rapid climb, 15 percent. The latter half in the century, the ratio of birth in America was decreased constantly to approximately 7 percent.

Answer 1

The line graph illustrates the fertilities in China and the USA from 1920 to 2000. At first glance it is clear that both nations had the considerable fluctuations in birth rates.

At the beginning of the period, the numberlevel of births in China had vary from 1920 and reached at 15 percent in 1935. In the next 5 years, this birth rate plunged significantly by 10 percent from 15 percent to 5 percent. In around 1950, 15 the percent of birth rate increased and reached a peak ofat 20 percent. Regarding the rest of the line, this percentagepattern went down to 3 percent in 2000.

The general trend in fertility of USA had fluctuated slightly between 11 percent and 13 percent (prior to 1940) between 1920 and 1935. It then fell to the lowest point at under 5 percent in 1945 and (the following 5 years saw a rapid climb) ,thereafter, there was a rapid climb and reach a highest point at 20% by the year 1950  , 15 percent. The latter half in the century, the ratio of birth in America was decreased constantly to approximately 7 percent.

This is of my opinion; hopefully, it would be helpful for you.

 

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Answer 2

Your response lacks the "overview". This is extremely important in task 1. Although you do not have to state a conclusion, you do have to give the overview of the graph/chart.