Bài IELTS writing task 1 - birth rate

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Answer 1

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the graph provided reveals some surprising similarities between the Chinese and US birth rates during the period from 1920 to 2000.

it is evident that the fertility rates of both nations fluctuated considerably, with lows during the 1940s and highs during the 1950s.

china's birth rates first increased from approximately 10̀% in 1920 to 15% in 1935, then plunged to a low of just  5% in the 1940s.

the US then saw a marked increase in fertility to over 15% in 1950.

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The line graph indicates the propotions of newborn babies in China and America from 1920 to 2000.

It is obvious that there was an erractic trend in the birth rates of both countries in the first 35 years before decreasing considerably over a 45-year period.

Between 1920 and 1930, not many changes can be seen in the data on the two nations. The figures for both varied from 10 to about 13. The first half of 1930s witnessed a considerable climb to 15 in China’s birth rates, followed by a slump by 10 during a decade. Likewise, the fertility rate of America was equal to that of China in 1945, at 5 after a dive from 1940. There was a brief recovery in 1955 when China birth rate reached a peak of 20, increasing by 15 over a period of 5 years. Similarly, the figure for the US surged from 5 in 1945 to 15 in 1950 before going down moderately to just around 7 at the end of 20^th century. Whereas,1950s saw a plunge of more than 10, preceding a remarkable fall in the birth rate of China in the last 40 years.