The chart below shows the GDP growth per year for three countries between 2007 and 2010.

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The chart demonstrates the advance in GDP per year for three countries from 2007 to 2010. Overall, there was an upward in the increasing GPD of the three nations over the period. However, there also had several remarkably changes in GDP growth of each country over four years.

In 2007, it can be seen that the percentage of Tunisia’s GDP was ranked top 1 with over 6%, followed by Ecuador with over 3%. The third place was Japan with 2%, three times less than Tunisia’s.

Nevertheless, from 2008 to 2010, the ranking in GDP growth of three countries had varied. In 2008, GPD growth in Tunisia decreased by 2%, which made Tunisia account for the second place, whilst the first place was Ecuador with nearly 5%. Japanese GDP had a dramatical rise in 2009, making it the largest country in GDP percentage whereas Tunisia and Ecuador had an significant decrease in percentage of GDP growth. In 2010, Japan continued to have the largest yearly GP growth, the second place was Tunisia and the other place was Ecuador.

 

 

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Answer 1

Mình nghĩ overview của bạn... sai so với những gì mình thấy trên biểu đồ. Rõ ràng chỉ có Japan là upward, còn 2 nước còn lại giảm rõ rệt. Cũng nhờ cách nhìn khái quát này mà bạn chia đoạn có phần chưa hợp lý (ấy là theo mình thấy nhé :D ) . Mình thì mình sẽ chia đoạn 1 cho 2 nước giảm và đoạn 2 cho Japan. Lúc nói riêng từng nước tăng giảm mình sẽ so sánh theo thứ tự cao thấp trong 3 nước như bạn.

 

there was an upward in the increasing GDP : upward trend, nếu đã nói upward trend thì không nói increasing... nữa

 

Comments

Thanks bạn, ko hiểu lúc viết nghĩ gì mà lại cho cả 3 nước upward nữa :)) đọc xong comment mình mới giật mình.

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:D nhiều lúc mình bị rối