The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999..

Question

The given pie chart and table provide  information about the survey of  people who visited four kinds of tourist attraction in England in 1999.

It is clear that the Theme parks and Museums &Galleries  is the most attractive to tourist with the ,on the contrary the rates of wild life park & zoo observed the lowest proportion Additionally , the statics shows that In theme parks people  are more likely to visit Blackpool  Pleasure Beach ,while legolan ,and chessington was their last options.

Turn into detail ,the theme parks was the most famous attractions in Britain with the visits percentages of 38% followed by that is the museums and galleries with the rates of 37%.As can be seen in the pie charts the historic houses &monuments were attracted 16% of tourist meanwhile the wildlife parks&zoo witnessed the percentages of 9% which is the lowest compare to 4 attractions .

As can be seen from the table ,the black pool pleasure beach attracted 47% tourist which is  almost half of the numbers of people who have visited thame parks in 1999.The second most attracted one is alton towers with the rates of 17% followed by pleasure land south port with the percentages of 16%.On the bottom of the table chession ton wolrd of adventures and legoland showed the same  porpotions which is 10% for each.

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Answer 1

bài bạn tốt, tuy nhiên có một số lỗi trình bày. Mình nghĩ bài này 6.5