The graph shows the income of four cafe in New York over last year. Summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Make comparisons where relevant.

Question

The graph shows the income of four cafe in New York over last year. In the year, the incme of The Tea Room tended to drop from May to December and rose from January to May in the following year. Internet Express income decreased slightly from January to June and went up wildy from June to the end of the year. Wifi Cafe earnings arose from the beginning of the year to July and tended to descend from July to September and suddenly increased from September to December. In terms of the earnings of Cafe Cool, despite having a dramatic fluctuation, it disposed towards the increase. In brief, Wifi Cafe, Internet Express and Cafe Cool fluctuated but verging towards the growth, The Tea Room had the contrast with them.

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