The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Question

The line chart illustrates the proportions of passengers of Undergound Station of London from 6a.m to 10p.m.

It is evident that the crowdest time was at about 8a.m while the lowest amount of people at the Underground Station was at 6a.m and 4p.m. Besides, through 12 hours, the figures for passengers of London Underground Station has been continuosly fluctuated.

Firstly, we can clearly see the soar of the number of passengers from 6 to 8.00 with 100 people and 400 people, relatively before a significant drop to almost 190 passengers at 10.00. After that the proportion has been simtaemously increased to 300 people etween 10.00 and 14.00.

Furthermore, the rate of London passengers experienced a flutuation from 15.00 to 22.00. At 16.00, there was the lowest point of Underground Station passengers which corresponded about 100 passengers. At 18.00 the number of passengers accounts for nearly 400 people which stands at the second after the crowdest time at 8.00 with 400 people. However, the rate again dramatically fell down to 125 passengers at 20.00.

Answer 1

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