The bar chart provides the information about the proportion of past-time -> part-time workers in four different nations of the United Kingdom from 1980 to 2010.
*Suggested Intro: The given bar chart illustrates the proportions of the UK member states' part-time employers in 1980 and 2010.
From an overall perspective ->Overally/In general, there has been a significant increase -> were significant increases (để ý chỗ này là số nhiều và chia ở quá khứ bạn nha) in past-time-> part-time workers between 1980 and 2010, except for Northern Ireland. Accordingly, Wales stood out as the country which had the most percentage of workers.
*Suggested Overview: In general, considerable upward changes occurred in figures for the whole nations, except Northern Ireland. Welsh part-time workers took the highest positions in the chart in two period, additionally.
In 1980, England accounted for about 25% workers, whereas Wales made up 31%. Moreover, both of the nations showed an upward trends in the percentage of past-time-> part-time workers in 2010. In England, the proportion grew quickly to over 30% and in Wales rose to just over 35%. (Bạn nên nói tập trung nhiều hơn vào số liệu của xứ Wales bởi đây là đối tượng có số liệu cao nhất, song song với đó là so sánh với số liệu của đối tượng thấp nhất)
Scotland had the least percentage of workers in 1980, with just over 10%. However, Scotland soared sharply to approximately 20% in 2010. By contrast, Northern Ireland is -> was the only country which experienced a decrease. In 1980, it had around 15% of people which ->who had -> having a part-time jobs. This dipped minimally by a couple of percentage in 2010) -> To contrast, Northern Ireland was the only country witnessing the drop, falling from 15% in 1980 to approximately 13% in 2010.
*Đối với 2 đoạn body, đoạn 1 bạn nên mô tả số liệu năm 1980, đoạn 2 về năm 2010 cho dễ chia bạn nhé. Học kĩ lại ngữ pháp cơ bản nha bạn, trong bài bạn sai ngữ pháp khá nhiều, thi thật sẽ bị mất điểmnặng đó