Ielts task 1 - the graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK BETWEEN 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport

Question

Given is the line graph illustrating the sum of commodity commuted by 4 modes namely road, water, rail, pipeline in the Uk measured by million tonnes at 29 years interval, starting in 1974.

A glance at the diagram reveals pronounced upward trends of the goods’ amounts shipped by 3 first means of transport in contrast to the figure for rail.

At the starting point, of the road group, over 65 million tonnes transported via water and rail, while the figure for the pipeline group stood at somewhat 3 million tonnes. During the following years, the trends experienced some fluctuations for all 4 means of transport. Although the quantities mostly went up, the rail one enjoyed a different tendency. 

In 2002, the figure for water group ended up totaling around 60 million tonnes which was three-fifth road one while the quantity for rail group remained as in 1974 and with pipeline- still stayed least.

Answer 1

Given is the line graph The given line graph illustrating  illustrate the sum of commodity commuted delivered by 4 four modes of transport namely road, water, rail, pipeline in the Uk measured by million tonnes at twenty-nine years intervals, starting in from 1974.

A glance at In general, the diagram reveals pronounced ( wrong word) upward trends of the goods’ amounts ( amount used for uncountable noun) shipped by three first means of transport in contrast to the figure for rail(?).

At the starting point of the road group, over 65 million tonnes was transported via water and rail, while the figure for the pipeline group stood at somewhat 3 million tonnes. During the following years, the trends experienced some fluctuations for all 4 means of transport. Although the quantities mostly went up, the rail one enjoyed a different tendency. 

In 2002, the figure for water group ended with the total around 60 million tonnes, which was three-fifth road one, while the quantity for rail group remained as in 1974 and with, pipeline still stayed at the least.

Answer 2

Given is the line graph illustrating the sum of commodity commodities commuted by 4 modes of transportation namely road, water, rail, and pipeline in the Uk UK (measured by million tonnes) at 29 years interval, over the 29-year period starting in from 1974.

A glance at the diagram reveals pronounced upward trends of the goods’ amounts shipped by 3 first means of transport in contrast to the figure for rail.

At the starting point, of the road group, ??? over 65 ??? million tonnes of goods were transported via water and rail, while the figure for the pipeline group stood at somewhat 3 million tonnes. During the following years, the trends experienced some fluctuations for all 4 means of transport. Although the quantities mostly went up, the rail one enjoyed a different tendency. 

In 2002, the figure for water group ended up totaling around 60 million tonnes, which was three-fifth road one, while the quantity for rail group remained as in 1974 and with pipeline- still stayed least.

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