Đề IELTS Writing Task 1 và 2 ngày 05-03-2020.

Question

The given  graph demonstrate the proportion of people in diverse age group go to a music event  from 2010 to 2015 in one city. 

It can be seen that at different age, the percentage of concert participants from 2010 to  2015 in a city also varies.Overall. a much larger percentage of people from 16-25 age attended music concert in comparison with a 55- 75+ age group, the 16-54 age group tended to the dramatic growth in music concert.

The percentage of people in 16-24 age group joined music concert gone up rapidly and was from 40% to 70%. The figures for people in 25-44 age group attended music concert dropped rapidly  at from 52% to 40% between 2010 and 2011. However it rocketed at about 10% in 2012. Then the 25-44 age group constantly increasing slightly to 2015 at from 50% to 53%. Just like the 25-44 age group above, 45-54 groups attended music concert tended to go down from 40% to 32% between 2010 and 2013. In cóntrast,, from 2013 to 2015 saw a dramatic rise in the proportion of people participated concert.

From 2010 to 2011, there are a slight rise in the proportion of people  in 55-64 age group enjoyed music concert and stayed unchanged in this proportion at about 29% in 2013. Then, it gradually gone down to 21% in 2015. A rapidly increase was seen in the percentage of people in 75+ group attended concert from 2010 to 2011 at about 12%. Although it also increased from 12% to 22% in stage of 2014 to 2015, it was reduced at about 11% from 2011 to 2013.

ĐÂY LÀ LẦN ĐẦU EM THỬ LÀM BÀI VỀ 1 DẠNG CỦA TASK 1, BÀI CỦA EM QUÁ SỐ TỪ QUY ĐỊNH, NHƯNG EM CŨNG KHÔNG BIẾT NÊN THAY ĐỔI CÁCH TỪ NGỮ HAY CÂU CHỮ NHƯ THẾ NÀO CHO HỚP LÝ HOẶC VỪA ĐỦ SỐ LƯỢNG TỪ. EM RẤT MONG ĐƯỢC MỌI NGƯỜI GỢI Ý ĐỂ EM CHỈNH SỬA TÓT HƠN Ạ.