The number of older people is increasing. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
These days, thanks to the comfortable standards of living development of living standard and universal accessibility of medical facilities, human’s life expectancy is now prolonged. Having an ageing population would certainly contribute to the wider community and aid knowledge to inexperienced young people, but there will also be some drawbacks. Therefore, that ageing population is growing that has both positive and negative effects on societies society. (Đoạn này tui thấy therefore ở đây k hợp lắm)
On the one hand, the increasing number of elders brings many benefits. In fact, older people have a great deal of precious experience and knowledge which is gained over their whole life over the years compared to adolescent. Therefore, young generations could get many valuable lessons from seniors in order to avoid repeating their mistakes. Moreover, a society with a large number of old people will have a lower crime rate as youngsters tend to have more problems with alcohol or drug abuse. Consequently, to some extents, growing aging population impacts on society in a good way. In this way, this can help the society develop and thrive.
On the other hand, this trend also have many adverse impacts. First, ageing population is regarded as unproductive group which doesn’t profit for society the most unproductive lot in the workforce of a nation but they require many community services such as medical service healthcare. Most of them can be a burden on society and their families because they are unable to keep working and they must spend money on medicines. Especially, governments have to spend a significant expenditure on paying pension for the elderly if its society has a high number of elders, while there are many other fields needing national investment. Second, with their poor health condition, old people are not able to give birth that leads to the decrease in birthrates. As a result, this certainly leads to many relevant problems for society.
In conclusion, there are plus points for ageing population including their valuable extensive experience and precious knowledge. However, the downsides would emerge consequently in terms of low productivity, the need for special care that takes many a lot of money and effort.
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