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Answer 1

Theo mình chữ Britain bạn nên giữ nguyên chứ không nên đổi thành England vì nó khác nhau.

 According to the chart, there are some tourist attraction we can see:..=>.., while the chart gives information about the percentage of travellers who visited various tourist attractions in Theme Park at the same time.

It is obviously said that theme parks, museums and galleries contained over 70 percents in the chart.-> accounted for over 70% of the total proportion in 1999. Besides, all attractions in theme parks were transformed and stastised apparently in a bar chart.-> in Theme Park, Blackpool Pleasure Beach attracted numerous visitors, which had a higher percentage than that of museums and galleries; historic houses and monument.