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I want to describe a summer vacation that I went on last year. Summer is the best time to relax and enjoy any vacations with family and friends. That summer vacation was special for me as it was my first time traveling with my family. We had a great time in Nha Trang - the city with the most beautiful beaches in the central of Vietnam. It was the first time I stayed at a 5-star hotel in the evening when I walked around the city at night.Afterwards, walking on the sand to enjoy the beautiful sunshine and clear blue skies made my day, we also enjoyed delicious seafood and coconuts. Indeed this vacation is a valuable money for the whole family.

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I want to describe a summer vacation that I went on last year. Summer is the best time to relax and enjoy any vacations with family and friends.my loved ones. That summer vacation was special for me as it was my first time traveling with my family. We had a great time in Nha Trang - the city with the most beautiful beaches in the central of Vietnam. It was the first time I stayed at a 5-star hotel which was such a wonderful experience. in the evening when I we walked around the city after having a good dinner at a nearby restaurant. at night.Afterwards,In the next morning, walking on the sand to enjoy the beautiful sunshine and clear blue skies really made my day, we also enjoyed delicious seafood and coconuts. Indeed this vacation is a valuable money memory for the whole my family.

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