Ielts task 1 number of tourists by season

Question

The bar chart illustrates the number of tourists who visited the city of Dover and Troy in each of four season. Overall, the number of people who visiting in Dover  each of four seasons was always lower than that of Troy expected in winter 

In spring the amount of tourists who travelled in Dover was 5000 higher than Troy. It was twice as the amount in summer. Then Dover's tourists was still increased slightly at 1500 in fall. After three seasons the figure of Dover's tourists was rose sharply at 2500 and was the highest amount in four seasons

Contrast with Dover , the number of Troy started nearly 5000 in spring. Then Troy's amount was climbed significant more than 20000 in summer. But in fall the figure of Troy's traveller was downtrend. It was declined slightly at 20000 and decreased significant to 5000 at the end of year.

 

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Answer 1

The bar chart illustrates the number of tourists who visited the city of Dover and Troy in each of four season. Overall, the number of people who visiting in Dover in each of four seasons was always lower than that  those of in Troy expected in winter. 

In spring, the amount of tourists who travelled in Dover was 5,000 higher than Troy. It was twice as the amount in summer. Then Dover's tourists was still increased slightly at 1500 in fall. After three seasons, the figure of Dover's tourists was rose sharply at 2,500 and was the highest amount in four seasons.

Contrast with Dover, the number of Troy's tourists started nearly 5,000 in spring. Then Troy's amount was climbed significantly more than 20,000 in summer. But in fall the figure of Troy's travellers was downtrend. It was declined slightly at 20,000 and decreased significantly to 5,000 at the end of year.

 

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