Topic: Your family

Question

Good afternoon teacher! Let me introduce myself and my family. There are four people in my family consist of my parents, my brother and me. Because it is a nuclear family, there are no grandparents or other relatives. Currently I am a high school student. My parents are very stricts about rules and curfew. However, they still respect my personal decisions. I am the type of person who doesn't like ties, so that's what I do not want in a warn home. I love the pampering from my grandparents, but not being too greedy, I think the love ang protection of the whole family makes me the happiest person in the world. To me, simply being with my family is rewarding. That's it and it's enough!

Answer 1

Good afternoon teacher! Let me introduce myself and my family. There are four people in my family consist of my parents, my brother and I. Because this is a nuclear family, there are no grandparents or other relatives. Currently, I am a high school student so my parents are very strict about rules and curfew. However, they still respect my personal decisions. I am the type of person who doesn't like ties, so that's what I do not want in a warning home. I love the pampering from my grandparents, but not being too greedy, I think the love and protection of the whole family make me the happiest person in the world. To me, simply being with my family is rewarding. That's it and it's enough!

Hello bạn, mình chỉ là SV lên gr tập tành sửa những bài trong khả năng của mình, nên nếu trong những lỗi ở trên mình chỉ ra, có điểm nào sai hay ko đúng ngữ pháp thì bạn thông cảm cho mình nhaaa 

 

Chữ tím là mình nghĩ bạn nên thay thế thì nó sẽ hay hơn, còn chữ đỏ là những lỗi cơ bản mà theo mình là bạn mắc phải á.

dù sao thì theo mình thấy topic này bạn viết cũng khá là ổn nếu đây là bài speaking, còn nếu là writing thì bạn không nên sử dụng những từ viết tắt như doesn't hay that's nha vì viết tắt sẽ làm điểm của tụi mình bị tụt xuống á.

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cảm ơn bạn nhé. đây đúng là bài speaking đấy^^