#topic : people say that family is a base from which one goes into the world with the great confidence. Agree or disagree ??

Question

I firmly believe that one may go into the world with the great confidence grounded on the family's foundation.Firstly, it's family that shapes the children's future.  Because most parents assume the responsibility for teaching and maturing their offsprings. Not only do they teach us the academic knowledge but they also transfer skill life. Additionally, they let us freely develop our strong points and reinforce our weakpoints. Secondly, home is where we find our mental support. Only when our inner emotions are confided with family members, are they carefully understood. For examples, every mothers are the best friends of theirs daughters. We may have many relationships or acquaintances, but when we have troubles, family will always stand by us. In conclusion, the invisible values of family to each inviduals in this changing life is undeniable.

Answer 1

1. You wrote: Additionally, they let us freely develop our strong points and reinforce our weakpoints.  ( sửa là weak points)

2. You wrote:; For examples, every mothers are the best friends of theirs daughters. (  mothers -> mother)

3. You wrote: ... family will always stand by us. In conclusion, the invisible values of family to each inviduals in this changing life is undeniable. (  inviduals ->  invidual )