Describe a Person You Admire

Question

The person i'd like to talk about is Son Tung M-TP. Son Tung is my favourite singer and i like his songs very much. His full name is Nguyen Thanh Tung and he was born July 5, 1994 in Thai Binh. He is a very successful and renowned singer. Of course, he also very handsome and cute. His music touches the hearts of millions of people, he has fans of different ages and of different music choice. His vocal, musical performance and lyrics make him an enviable and admirable singer. He is such a singer who can amuse me with most of his songs. Because of the rich lyrics and beautiful voice, he has become my most favourite singer.  <3

Answer 1

The person i'd like to talk about is Son Tung M-TP. Son Tung is my favourite singer and i like his songs very much. His full name is Nguyen Thanh Tung and he was born July 5, 1994 in Thai Binh. He is a very successful and renowned singer. Of course, he is (động từ to be) also very handsome and cute. His music touches songs touch the hearts of millions of people (nên sử dung 'songs' thay cho 'music' nghĩa là 'bài hát của anh ấy chạm đến trái tim của hàng triệu người') , he has lots of fans of different ages and of different music choice. His vocal, musical performance (chỉ cần 'performance' là đủ) and lyrics make him an enviable and admirable singer. He is such a singer who can amuse me with most of his songs ('I was amused at/ by most of his songs' [to be amused at/by + V-ing]). Because of the rich lyrics and beautiful voice, he has become (sửa thành 'has became' [hiện tại hoàn thành] hoặc 'becomes' [hiện tại đơn]) my most favourite singer.  <3