Task 1: Bar chart - transportation

Question

Mọi người góp ý giúp mình nha, với mình mới thi lần đầu nên chưa biết band hiện tại bao nhiêu, mọi người có thể chấm luôn giúp mình bài viết sau được band bao nhiêu không? Mình cảm ơn nhiều lắm.

 

The table gives information about five types of vehicles registered in Australia in 2010, 2012 and 2014.

The table illustrates the number of registrations in using five types of vehicles in Australia in the years of 2010, 2012 and 2014. 

 

It is clear that while the number of people using commercial vehicles, motorcycles, heavy trucks and light trucks as their means of transportation gradually increased in three years, the figure for passenger vehicles experienced the fluctuation. 

 

In 2010, the quantity of passenger vehicles was much higher compared to other types, at 11.800.000, followed by the figure for commercial vehicles, with 2.300.000. During the four years period, registrations for passenger vehicles remained at the first position in terms of the number, with 13.000.000, while the percentage of change in commercial vehicles reached a significant number, about 17.4%. 

 

Turning to the number of motorcyclists, heavy truckers and light truckers, there was generally an upward trend in the period shown. At the beginning, the number of people using motorcycles started at 540.000, followed by the figure for heavy trucks and light trucks, at 384.000 and 106.000 respectively. The proportion of registrators for heavy trucks, however, saw the slightest increase, at only 8.3%.

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Answer 1

The table illustrates the number of registrations in using terms of five types of vehicles in Australia in the years of 2010, 2012 and 2014. 

 

It is clear that while Overall,the number of people using commercial vehicles, motorcycles, heavy trucks and light trucks as their means of transportation gradually increased in three years, the figure for passenger vehicles experienced the fluctuation. 

 

In 2010, the quantity of passenger vehicles was much higher compared to other types exceedingly higher than remainders, at 11.800.000, followed by the figure for indicator of commercial vehicles, with 2.300.000. During the four years period, (registrations for passenger vehicles remained at the first position in terms of the number, with 13.000.000) vary your structure, while the percentage of change in commercial vehicles reached a significant number, about 17.4%. 

 

Turning to the number of motorcyclists, heavy truckers and light truckers, there was generally an upward trend in the period shown. At In the beginning, the number of people using motorcycles started at 540.000, (followed by the figure for) the respective number of heavy trucks and light trucks, at were384.000 and 106.000 . The proportion of registrators for heavy trucks, however, saw the slightest increase, at only 8.3%.

 

 

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