Bài IELTS task 1: the table below gives information on visitor statistics for 1996,1998 and 2000 for 1996,1998 and 2000 for various World Heritage sites in Australia.

Question

The table shows the data on the number of tourists visiting six different World Heritage sites in Australia in three years 1996, 1998 and 2000.

Overall, it is clear that Great Barrier Reef is the destination that has the highest statistic of visitors, while the smallest number recorded for Macquarie Island during a period of time. In addition, the figures for Great Barrier Reef, Blue Mountains and Tasmania Wilderness experienced an increase from 1996 to 2000, whereas there was a noticeable fall in the number of visitors to Central Eastern Rainforest Reserve and Shark Bay, and a fluctuation in the statistic for Macquarie Island at the same period of time.

In 2006, Great Barrier Reef welcomed 1,670,000 tourists and this number rose dramatically and topped out at 3,200,000 tourists in 2000. Meanwhile, a minimal growth in the quantity of visitors to Blue Mountains and Tasmania Wilderness was undergone from 526,000 and 450,000 people to 581,000 and 483,000 people respectively between 1996 and 2000.

By contrast, the period from 1996 to 2000 saw a marked decrease in visitor statistics for Central Eastern Rainforest Reserve and Shark Bay from 810,000 and 84,000 tourists to 770,000 and 89,000 tourists respectively. At the same time, the number of people visiting Macquarie Island varied between 310 and 330 visitors.

 

Answer 1

The table shows the data on the number of tourists visiting six different World Heritage sites in Australia in three years 1996, 1998 and 2000.

Overall, it is clear that Great Barrier Reef is the destination that has had the highest statistic of visitors, while the smallest number was recorded for by Macquarie Island during a the given period of time. In addition, the figures for Great Barrier Reef, Blue Mountains and Tasmania Wilderness experienced an increases from 1996 to 2000, whereas there was a noticeable fall in the number of visitors to Central Eastern Rainforest Reserve and Shark Bay, and a fluctuation in the statistic for Macquarie Island at the same period of time. (This sentence is too long)

In 2006, Great Barrier Reef welcomed 1,670,000 tourists and this number rose dramatically and topped out at 3,200,000 tourists in 2000. Meanwhile, a minimal growth in the quantity of visitors to Blue Mountains and Tasmania Wilderness was undergone underwent from 526,000 and 450,000 people to 581,000 and 483,000 people respectively between 1996 and 2000.

By contrast, the period from 1996 to 2000 saw a marked decrease in visitor the statistics for Central Eastern Rainforest Reserve and Shark Bay from 810,000 and 84,000 tourists to 770,000 and 89,000 tourists respectively. At the same time, the number of people visiting Macquarie Island varied between 310 and 330 visitors.

 

This is a little bit too long for a 20-minute task. I don't think you will accomplish this writing under exam condition.