Writing task 1: the graph below shows the internet users as percentage of population in USA, Canada

Question

The line graph compares the percentage of people in 3 countries using the internet from 1999 to 2009.

Overall, people using the internet in Canada was highest, while Mexico internet users was lowest. People in 3 countries tended to use the internet more during the period shown.

In 1999, about 20 percent of people in USA using Internet. In the same year, the number for that in Canada and Mexico were around 11 and 4 percent respectively. 2 years late, Canada overtook USA as the country that had the highest internet users.

From 2002 to 200, the amount of internet consumed in Canada increased constantly and reached a peak of 90 percent in the last year. There was a slightly rose in the number of people using Internet in Mexico and ended at about 27 percent in 2009. The rest of the period also witnessed a gradual climb in the number of people consume internet in USA

Answer 1

Not fully developed, some form of words are incorrect (late => later,...)
Only listed, lack of comparisons between periods

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