Bài ielts task 1 sáng 22/4

Question

The bar chart illustrated the estimated percentage of car trips by eigh diffent purposes and by females and males drivers in the year of 2005

Overall, the percentage of both gender drove car for working was the most popular.And the  propotion of male and female performing the activity that saw the difference.

As regard work, there was more than 50 percent men drove car, far higher than women at 39 percent.The figure for visit town and recreation of males were over three times as high as that of females In the visit town,only 2 percent women wwnt to by cars, this lowest figure compared with another one,and 10 percent of men drove car.Meanwhile,just 3 percent females drove car for recreation,there was a sighnificanly higher in the percentage males drove cars,

In stark contrash to this, women used car for the rest of items higher than men.With respect to shopping, females constituted 18 percent, while only 10 percent men drove car for shopping.Running errand,visiting friends and going to banks  accounted for around 8 percent of men and women stood at around 10 percent

Answer 1

1. You wrote: ...he estimated percentage of car trips by eigh diffent purposes and by females and mal...

Suggestion: eight

2. You wrote: ...timated percentage of car trips by eigh diffent purposes and by females and males drive...

Suggestion: different

3. You wrote: ...igh diffent purposes and by females and males drivers in the year of 2005 Overall, the perce...

Suggestion: male drivers

4. You wrote: ...r working was the most popular.And the propotion of male and female performing the activ...

Suggestion: proportion

5. You wrote: ...e activity that saw the difference. As regard work, there was more than 50 percent me...

Feedback: Use the plural form in this expression. Revise: "As regards". Alternatively, use "Regarding".

Error type: Word form error

Suggestion: As regards, Regarding

6. You wrote: ...her than women at 39 percent.The figure for visit town and recreation of males were over ...

Feedback: Did you mean "to visit" or "for visiting"? We do not put "for" before the base form of a verb.

Error type: Infinitive error

Suggestion: to visit, for visiting

8. You wrote: ... In the visit town,only 2 percent women wwnt to by cars, this lowest figure compared...

Suggestion: went

12. You wrote: ...es drove car for recreation,there was a sighnificanly higher in the percentage males drove ca...

Suggestion: significantly

13. You wrote: ... percentage males drove cars, In stark contrash to this, women used car for the rest of...

Suggestion: contrast
15. You wrote: ...ng errand,visiting friends and going to banks accounted for around 8 percent of men ...

Suggestion: going to bank