Cambridge 1, test 3, writing task 1

Question

The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

(You should write at least 150 words.)

Answer:

The bar chart demonstrates how much money per week is spent on 3 categories of fast food in England, namely hamburger, fish and chips, pizza  while the graph illustrates the comsumption trends in fast foods over the course of 20 years starting in 1970.

Looking at the bar chart, it is immediately obvious that high income registers the highest figure which is spent for hambergurs, and low income shows the lowest figure for pizza. And the line chart illustrates that the money is spent for hamburgurs and pizza experiences an upward trend with the exception of fish and chips.

In term of the bar chart, the money is spent for hamburgers is above 40, which is the highest, followed by well under 35 in average income and under 15 in low income. And the money is spent for pizza increased from high income to low income, too. The highest of the money for fish and chips is in average income and the same figures in high income and low income were under 20.

Regarding the line chart, hambergurs stood at under 100 in 1970. This figure increased up from under 100 to over 500 in 1990. A similar trend was witnessed in pizza, which increased from under 50 to about 300 in 1990. While the money for fish and chips decreased from above 300 to 250 in 1990.

 

Answer 1

1. You wrote: ... pizza while the graph illustrates the comsumption trends in fast foods over the course of...

Suggestion: consumption

2. You wrote: ...s the highest figure which is spent for hambergurs, and low income shows the lowest figure...

Suggestion: hamburgers

3. You wrote: ... low income shows the lowest figure for pizza. And the line chart illustrates that th...Suggestion: a pizza, the pizza

4. You wrote: ...illustrates that the money is spent for hamburgurs and pizza experiences an upward trend w...

Suggestion: hamburgers

5. You wrote: ...s and pizza experiences an upward trend with the exception of fish and chips. In term of the bar cha...

Suggestion: except, except for

6. You wrote: ...th the exception of fish and chips. In term of the bar chart, the money is spent fo...

7. You wrote: ...e 40, which is the highest, followed by well under 35 in average income and under 15 in lo...Suggestion: well-under

8. You wrote: ... low income. And the money is spent for pizza increased from high income to low incom...Suggestion: a pizza, the pizza

 

9. You wrote: ...highest of the money for fish and chips is in average income and the same figures ...

Suggestion: are

10. You wrote: ...re under 20. Regarding the line chart, hambergurs stood at under 100 in 1970. This figure...

Suggestion: hamburgers

11. You wrote: ... 1990. A similar trend was witnessed in pizza, which increased from under 50 to about...

Suggestion: a pizza, the pizza

 

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