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People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?

Though life now is easier, more comfortable and satisfying in big cities, dwellers still get struggle with troubles during their basic life which are explained below. To my way of thinking, I do not believe discouraging them to keep staying in cities is an effective measure to solve this.

First and foremost, it is obvious that one of the serious urban problems is pollution. The surroundings of megacities are always covered with air pollution from traffic, noise pollution from constructions, thermal pollution from the careless use of water of people and numerous kinds of pollution like that. It not only negatively affects people’s health but also restricts them to happily enjoying life. Secondly, adults, especially students and undergraduates, have to work and study under pressure more because they are expected to finish tasks and gain success too much, which contributes to the higher rate of youngsters who commit suicide and suffer from depression. Another noticeable cause of this is poisonous food. These days, fertilizer, chemical ingredients and preservatives have been usually put into vegetables and fruits by sellers to make customers deceived and think that they are actually fresh. As a result, they face health diseases which mostly come from food while the bad salespeople get many profits.

Otherwise, I claim that governments should impose strict laws and organize social campaigns to reduce the problems, rather than make the citizens live in remote areas. It seems to me that people will probably get involved in crime more since job opportunities are not plentiful in villages. Hence, they have to be risky to earn money for a living by stealing and robbing valuables. Furthermore, pupils will not have the chance to study and develop their intelligence and abilities. To illustrate, education in unpopular areas are underdeveloped with old-fashioned study methods such as rote learning and heart learning. Therefore, students cannot experience new heights of knowledge like those in large cities where they can join clubs and go on field trips which make everything understandable.

Overall, pollution, stress and food poisoning are the causes of this trouble and I insist on the ineffectiveness of the suggestion in reducing this, which is to stop dwellers from living in cities.

Please, please help me with this. Thank you so much!!!

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Though life now is easier, more comfortable and satisfying in big cities, dwellers still get struggle with troubles during their basic life which are explained below. To my way of thinking, I do not believe discouraging them to keep staying in cities is an effective measure to solve this.

First and foremost, it is obvious that one of the serious urban problems is pollution. The surroundings of megacities are always covered with air pollution from traffic, noise pollution from constructions, thermal pollution from the careless use of water of people and numerous kinds of pollution like that. It not only negatively affects people’s health but also restricts them to happily enjoying life. Secondly, adults, especially students and undergraduates, have to work and study under pressure more because they are expected to finish tasks and gain success too much, which contributes to the higher rate of youngsters who commit suicide and suffer from depression. Another noticeable cause of this is poisonous food. These days, fertilizer, chemical ingredients, and preservatives have been usually put into vegetables and fruits by sellers to make customers deceived and think that they are actually fresh. As a result, they face health diseases that mostly come from food while the bad salespeople get many profits.

Otherwise, I claim that governments should impose strict laws and organize social campaigns to reduce the problems, rather than make the citizens live in remote areas. It seems to me that people will probably get involved in crime more since job opportunities are not plentiful in villages. Hence, they have to be risky to earn money for a living by stealing and robbing valuables. Furthermore, pupils will not have the chance to study and develop their intelligence and abilities. To illustrate, education in unpopular areas are underdeveloped with old-fashioned study methods such as rote learning and heart learning. Therefore, students cannot experience new heights of knowledge like those in large cities where they can join clubs and go on field trips which make everything understandable.

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