Bài IELTS TASK 2 -Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on living standards on Earth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Due to having a supernatural brain than any creatures on Earth, human is always curious about the lives outside the planet we are living. Thus, a great deal of global funds have been furnished to service for the research. Nevertheless, it is argued that this amount of money used has been wasteful and it should be spent to enhance the standard of living on Earth. With my perception, I am not all for this notion.

In the first place, the space research has showed variety of things in the whole universe we had never known before without the appearance of technology. Needless to say, had it not been for the commodities of inventing and discovering of science into this aspect, human would never know about the existence of the other planets, the reason why Earth always have the days and the nights alternated, etc. Accordingly, the government funds required has been invested with the particular intention which is to broaden human’s knowledge.

In addition, the investment funds into the space studies of nations is synonymous with improving the lives on Earth. Nowadays, not only are outside planets in process of exploring but the scientists have also tried to figured out the undiscovered issues on the globe. Based on the documents collected from the research, they can boost the level of life of people in the world.

Finally, each country’s policy has its funds selected plainly for each aim. For instance, in terms of the democracy republican regime, a large fraction of money they get tax levy from the people will be served for the demands of their inhabitants, and the other will be attended for the purposes like the issue being discussed. Consequently, it is indisputable that the funds collected from the international organizations don’t hinder any the activities of human being.

In summation, we – Earth creatures are not born to be sole in the whole massive universe, so it has nothing wrong to have the right to explore more about the lives around and outside this globe. Thus, the space research has spent a large amount of both time and effort, arming with funds is the most practical support should be invested more and more.

 

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Bài bạn này dài, và còn dùng nhiều từ chỉ được sử dụng trong speaking. Các từ này không nên được đưa vào writing. Ngữ pháp của bạn chưa được tốt cho lắm; có thể bạn thấy bạn viết đúng ngữ pháp từ cái nhìn của bạn, nhưng với nhiều năm kinh nghiệm viết writing, mình thấy bài bạn còn chưa được nhiều chỗ.

Band 6-6.5! không phải không dùng less common vocabulary, mà là vì ngữ pháp và cách dùng word choice kéo điểm bạn xuống
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Cảm ơn bạn nhiều lắm. Mình sẽ chú ý nhiều hơn về grammar và vocab  <3
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tớ thấy bài bạn có hướng hơi giống văn nói, bạn nên chú ý và về ngữ pháp nữa nhé ạ
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