Mọi người giúp em chữa bài writing task 1 process về milk production với ạ

Question

  

The diagram depicts how milk is made from cows and processed into cheese,cream and butter and packaged for sale to customers

 

     Overall, it is clear that there are 8 primary stages in the manufacture of milk, starting with when the cows graze at the grass, to when milk is put into container for sale

 

    The process begins with cows graze in the field before they are milked by a machine two times a day. After that, the milk is stored in a refrigerator, after which it is delivered to a tanker, ready to be transported to the dairy. 

 

    The next step is divided into two sections, one is to convert milk into dairy products such as cheese, cream and butter, the other is to pasteurize and put them into containers. Once the milk has been pasteurized and packaged, it is subsequently brought to supermarkets and shops, ready for consumers to purchase. 

 

Answer 1

Overall, it is clear that there are 8 ("eight") primary stages in the manufacture of milk, starting with when the cows graze at the grass (starting at the grazing on grass), to when milk is put into container for sale (the final distributing process)

Answer 2

And package
To when=>when
After which=>after

Answer 3

Overall, it is clear that there are eight primary stages in the manufacture of milk, starting with when the cows graze at the grass, when milk is put into container for sale

The process begins with cows graze in the field before they are milked by a machine two times a day. After that, the milk is stored in a refrigerator, after it is delivered to a tanker, ready to be transported to the dairy. 

The next step is divided into two sections, one is to convert milk into dairy products such as cheese, cream and butter, the other is to pasteurize and put them into containers. Once the milk has been pasteurized and packaged, it is subsequently brought to supermarkets and shops, ready for consumers to purchase. 

 

 

Answer 4

k nên viết thành số b nhé: 8 -> eight