Values of study

Question

"The shortest road to success is studying"Have you heard of that?Right, study is important as it can help us widen knowledge and earn living

First off all, we cannot grasp knowledge without studying. As a result, people from everywhere,at all times, at all ages, try to study to know more about the world. If we do not study, it is imposible for us to make progress in our awwareness. If we want to gain the independence,liberty, happiness, we have to study

Secondly, it can't be denied that we study to earn living in the future. Everyone knows studying offers us a wide range of choices of jobs in the future. We have to sudy to earn nough skills, qualification to have a job that can can give you a good salary. It not only improves your family's income but also helps them live better

All in all, studying has some indispensible benefits so that we need to raise everyone's awareness of trying to study hard

Answer 1

1.If we do not study, it is (will be) imposible for us to make progress in our awwareness.(awareness)

2.We have to sudy to earn enough skills, qualification to have a job that can can give you a good salary (a good salary job)

3.All in all, studying has some indispensible benefits so that we need   to   raise everyone's awareness of (by) trying to study hard