Bài IELTS Task 1 sáng 24/10-How to make a good impression on a neighttbor

Question

First impressions are always the most important,so you need to make a good impression with people around you,especially your neighnbors.Because neighbors are the easiest people to help you when there are no relatives next to you.The first,you should actively get acquainted and introduce yourself with the polite attitude. You can talk friendly and try to learn a bit about your neighbors.This will give your neighbor a feeling that you are a polite person and you know how to live with people around you.The second,learning how to keep boundaries with neighbors which means that respecting each other's property,throwing away garbage and putting everything in place.The third,paying attention tho the noise in your home.If you organize a party,make sure it is not too noisy and ends at a reasonable time.Because,noise is one of the problems affecting neighbors' separate activities,You should make a good first impression on your because it would be great if some liked you from the first contact and the neighbors weren't exception.

Answer 1

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