Bài Speaking: Describe your dream working enviroment in a multi-national company
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I am a very flexiable individual and I can perform and adjust to any type of work enviroment. But, I must admit that I thrive in work with various sized teams of passionate, imaginative and intelligent. I think enthusiasts who can motivate me pursue the passion, not give up when I meet difficult situations. Creative people give me noval ideals, think out of the box. And people are smart help me solve problem quickly. Beside, I think space working is play an inportant role. My dream working enviroment in addition to having enough equiment service jobs, I wish my workplace in furture have all things which I can use free.

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1. You wrote: I am a very flexiable individual and I can perform and adjust...

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2. You wrote: ... perform and adjust to any type of work enviroment. But, I must admit that I thrive in wor...

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3. You wrote: ...ult situations. Creative people give me noval ideals, think out of the box. And peopl...

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4. You wrote: ...box. And people are smart help me solve problem quickly. Beside, I think space working ...

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5. You wrote: ...re smart help me solve problem quickly. Beside, I think space working is play an inpor...

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6. You wrote: ...eside, I think space working is play an inportant role. My dream working enviroment in ad...

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7. You wrote: ...lay an inportant role. My dream working enviroment in addition to having enough equiment s...

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8. You wrote: ...enviroment in addition to having enough equiment service jobs, I wish my workplace in fu...

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9. You wrote: ...nt service jobs, I wish my workplace in furture have all things which I can use free.

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