Writing About My Sunday

Question

Hi everyone.My name Thao,I'm ten years old.Today I am going to talk about my Sunday.                              I love Sundays!                                                                                                                                                On Sunday,I don't go to school.So I usually get up late in the morning.In the afternoon,I  often go out with my friend.Every other Sunday ,I visit my grandparents.When I visit them. In the evening,I watch TV or play computer games                                                                                                                                       Sunday is fun and relaxing!                                                                  

Answer 1

Hi be Thao;

I really appreciate your endeavour; but you notice some highlights where i have mentioned as the below to make your sentence smoothly and coherently. Enjoy your weekend!

Hi everyone.

My name is Thao, I'm ten years old.Today, I am going to talk about my Sunday that i really love. On Sunday,I don't go to school. So, I usually get up late in the morning. I often go out (hang out/meet up) with my friends in the afternoon. Every other Sunday, I often visit my grandparents when I visit them they don't come to my home. In the evening, I usually watch TV or play computer games.                                                                                                                                      Sunday is fun and relaxing!