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Question

My school is Luong Son A primaryschool. My school is very clean and beautiful, teachers and students are very innocent, fun, friendly and hospitable.There are six hundred students and seventy-five  teachers. There are 25 rooms in the school. Fifteen rooms are for classes, two room is for the teachers, a special room for the Head Teacher and other room. The results of the school is good. . They are high qualified teacher. . They loves us like their own children. There is a big play ground in front of the school. I love my school very much.

Answer 1

primaryschool -> primary school

...teachers and students are very innocent, fun, friendly and hospitable -> innocent và hospitable mình thấy k hợp, bạn thay từ khác nhé.

...two room is for the teachers, a special room for the Head Teacher and other room -> two ROOMS... and other ROOMS.

The results of the school is good. . They are high qualified teacher -> Câu này k có nghĩa.

Answer 2

theo mình sau beautiful thì nên có dấu chấm...còn Two room thì phải thêm 's' sửa lại thành " Two rooms are for the..."

còn ' they loves' thì bỏ 's' đi vì chủ từ là 'they'

Answer 3

Mình xin phép sửa bài của bạn lại như sau; theo lối viết thì căn bản còn nếu bạn muốn upgrade lên IELTS form bạn reply mình nha:

Talk about my childhood memories about school, I have to say that I used to be a student of Luong Son A primary school. Actually, there are many things which I take pride in is that my school is (very) completely (clean) spotless  and beautiful, beside that, all of the teachers and students are very [(innocent)-từ này là vô tội mà], fun, [(friendly and hospitable)-nghĩa nó same nhau rồi nha bạn].A  number of students are roughly six hundred students and seventy-five  teachers. About the facilities, there are 25 rooms in this school. [(Fifteen rooms are for classes, two room is for the teachers, a special room for the Head Teacher and other room.)-nối thành câu ghép luôn đi bạn] To be more specific, rooms are separated into 3 main purposes: rooms used for classes is about fifteen, two rooms are used for teachers, the last room is a special room where the Head Teacher works there and so on.One of the main reasons that makes me proud of that the results of the school is pretty good. A group of teachers is (They are) high-qualified. They (loves) treated us (like) as their own children. Around the school, you can probably see there is a spacious play ground in front of the school. All in all, I love my school very much.

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